Talk:Freddie de Guingand/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:39, 12 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "In 1926 de Guingand volunteered for service on secondment with the King's African Rifles." - Is there a link for secondment?
 * Yes, secondment, per WP:WHAAOE. Linked. (At the Hood it was called it TDY - you may be more familiar with that term.)  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  01:56, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "he was appointed as Eighth Army's Brigadier General Staff (Operations) vice Brigadier Jock Whiteley." - I'm finding this phrase confusing. It may just be comprehension issues on my part, though.
 * See Staff_(military). The British staff was divided into G and A&Q branches. The BGS was the head of the G branch. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  01:56, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "his wife Arlie was understandably unimpressed with austere post-war Britain" - I'm concerned that "understandably" may be editorializing here, may be best to leave the word out.
 * Deleted. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  01:56, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

Sourcing and image licensing looks fine.

Not much to nitpick on here; good work. Hog Farm Talk 01:25, 16 May 2021 (UTC)