Talk:Free Churro/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * In the caption, change "delivering" to "delivers". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "episodes of 2018". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * Remove the comma after "was not true". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "wrong funeral". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * "title character (Bea Arthur) speaking" "title character, Bea Arthur, speaking" ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The reference after "therapist" doesn't mention the episode's title, so I would add a second reference that does (like this). ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Citations should always be used after every quote, so I would recite the one from Collider after "single monologue". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The source being used from Animation World Network actually says the three angles were switched "between talking about his mother, riffing on things, and telling funny stories", not "his mother, riffing and making jokes, and telling anecdotes". ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "for half an hour" "for [half an hour]" or "for a half hour" (the actual quote) ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The rest of the article uses the entire show's title BoJack Horseman, so I would change the only use of BoJack after "other episodes of" to just that. ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Add a "Critical response" or "Critical reception" subsection header. ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Try adding more reviews and lowering the use of quotes with the guidelines at WP:RECEPTION. ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)