Talk:Freedom from Fear (painting)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 13:31, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

Nominator: TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD)

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  13:31, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * Pass
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * See below for issues with lead & layout . ✅


 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * Pass
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * Pass
 * C. No original research:
 * Pass
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Pass
 * B. Focused:
 * Pass
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Pass
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Pass
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Pass
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * Pass
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for the 1b issues . ✅ Pass.

WP:LEAD: ✅


 * Fix Lead (WP:BETTER).
 * The opening paragraph should clearly explain the subject so that the reader is prepared for the greater level of detail that follows. I recommend the following revision:
 * Freedom from Fear is the last of the four most well-known oil paintings produced by the American artist Norman Rockwell that were based on the four goals called the Four Freedoms enunciated by the President of the United States Franklin D. Roosevelt in his State of the Union Address delivered on January 6, 1941. The series also called the Four Freedoms was published in the March 13, 1943 Issue of The Saturday Evening Post alongside an essay by a prominent thinker of the day Stephen Vincent Benét. The painting is generally described as depicting the American children being tucked in by their parents during the The Blitz.
 * Done with modifications.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:44, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

WP:LAYOUT: ✅


 * Fix short paragraphs (MOS:PARAGRAPHS). Paragraphs should be short enough to be readable, but long enough to develop an idea. Short paragraphs and single sentences generally do not warrant their own subheading. Rearrange the content so that subheadings with short paragraphs are minimized.
 * Fix short paragraphs in Description section.
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:48, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Fix short paragraphs in Production section.
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:45, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Fix short paragraphs in History section.
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:06, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Fix section Themes. The paragraph is too short.
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:14, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  03:17, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  11:35, 6 January 2014 (UTC)