Talk:French battleship France/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:45, 10 October 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * 1) Quick easy one Parsons goes to a disamb page
 * Deleted.


 * 1) The lede states 'Communist sympathizers in the crew and difficult conditions' but its not covered in the main text so needs a cite
 * Done


 * 1) The long tons displacement differs between the text and the inf box 25,175 long tons to 25,180
 * Done


 * 1) Same with the torpedo tubes four 450-millimetre (18 in) and 4 × 450-millimetre (17.7 in)
 * Done


 * 1) Inf box needs a cite for the complement as its not mentioned in the text
 * Done


 * 1) Inf box also needs the builders details added at the moment its the city Saint-Nazaire
 * Done


 * 1) Not sure about this one but the namesake in the inf box goes to the country France should it not go to other ships of the same name ?
 * She's named for the country.


 * 1) Career section end of first paragraph needs a cite 'They were returning from Russia when World War I began, but made it to France without encountering German ships.'
 * Done


 * 1) The Salvage section at one line needs expanding or incorporating into the proceeding section
 * 2) The WWI section is also very small is there nothing more that can be added
 * I haven't been able to find more in English.


 * 1) Ref 8 need to be formatted the same as the other refs WP:CITESHORT and added to the bibliography
 * Done


 * 1) Ref 11 http://www.bobhenneman.info/grounding.htm what makes it reliable ?
 * Deleted

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.--Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 10 October 2010 (UTC)


 * Passed GA --Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:49, 11 October 2010 (UTC)