Talk:French battleship Lorraine/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AustralianRupert (talk · contribs) 12:14, 15 December 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article against the GA criteria. I will look to post a review shortly. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 12:14, 15 December 2015 (UTC)

Overall, this article is in very good shape. I have the following suggestions/comments: AustralianRupert (talk) 12:46, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * inconsistent: in the body, "1124 and 1133 officers and enlisted men" v. in the infobox, "34 officers, 139 petty officers, 1,020 enlisted" (several issues: firstly, commas probably should be added to the body, but secondly the infobox numbers appear uncited as they are not covered by the body);
 * Not sure where the breakdown came from, but I've fixed it
 * inconsistent: in the body, "She displaced around 25,000 metric tons (25,000 long tons; 28,000 short tons)" v. in the infobox "Full load: 26,000 metric tons (26,000 long tons)"
 * Probably a typo. Good catch.
 * coverage: the infobox mentions range, but the body doesn't seem to; likewise, deck, turret and casemate armor doesn't seem to be mentioned in the body, nor is normal displacement (23,936 metric tons (23,558 long tons));
 * All added to the body
 * coverage: the infobox seems to mention a post 1935 armament, but the body doesn't seem to clarify this...although there are details on a 1943-44 (?) refit;
 * The center turret removal is mentioned in the service history, but I just removed it from the infobox. This article was written years ago, and I've moved away from including refits in the box to avoid clutter.
 * links: suggest adding links for the French 10th and US 66th Divisions;
 * We have an article for the American unit, but not one for the French one
 * in the References section: this is inconsistent: "Annapolis: Naval Institute Press" v. "Annapolis, MD: Naval Institute Press";
 * Fixed
 * Further reading section: the harvnb script seems to be identifying quite a few "harv" anchor errors (minor nitpick - not a GA criterion);
 * All fixed
 * Further reading section: "Les cuirassés français de 23,500 tonnes" --> is it possible to add an English translation of this title?
 * Good idea
 * Images: "File:Bretagne Brassey's.png" --> I suggest changing the licence to "PD-US-1923".
 * Done.
 * Not sure if you have seen these comments at all, but if you have, can you please let me know what you think? Cheers, AustralianRupert (talk) 02:02, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I've just been pretty busy lately. Thanks for the review. Parsecboy (talk) 11:45, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * No worries, thanks for your changes. I will pass the article now. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 22:32, 19 December 2015 (UTC)