Talk:French cruiser Latouche-Tréville/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 22:46, 15 April 2015 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With a few minor grammatical corrections, and the comments below addressed, the article now complies with MOS policies on layout, grammar, and structure. &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 19:12, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
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: The article makes frequent use of several reliable published sources cited in its bibliography. No signs of original research. &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 02:58, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
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: The article seems to cover all relevant aspects of its topic in a thorough but non-excessive manner. &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 02:56, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
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. With a slight modification made to a single sentence, I am satisfied that the article's tone is neutral and appropriate. &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 02:55, 8 May 2015 (UTC) . Since its creation in 2010, the article has not been the subject of any disruptive editing. &#34;Carry me down, carry me down&#59; carry me down into the wiki!&#34; (talk) 01:16, 27 April 2015 (UTC) : The two images used in the article are appropriately licensed and do not infringe on fair use laws. Both are illustratively relevant to the topic. &#34;Carry me down, carry me down&#59; carry me down into the wiki!&#34; (talk) 01:17, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
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Comments

 * In paragraph 2 of the section "Construction and career", it says, "Latouche-Tréville was sent to Souda Bay, Crete, on 17 March 1897 at the outbreak of the Greco-Turkish War to 24 June." I'm a bit confused by the way this is worded. Is the 24th of June the date when the cruiser's mission at Souda Bay concluded? If so, it should probably be written more like "...at the outbreak of the Greco-Turkish War, until 24 June." &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 03:01, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:48, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks! &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 19:13, 9 May 2015 (UTC)

Passed. &#34;A wiki of beauty is a joy forever.&#34; Seriously. That&#39;s how long it&#39;d take to read! (talk) 19:13, 9 May 2015 (UTC)