Talk:French cruiser Protet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 10:59, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Harrias talk 10:59, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

Images

 * The sole image in the article seems to be licensed appropriately, but the link provided is dead, so I can not verify the details provided.

Prose

 * "The Catinat class was ordered to as part of the program.." I don't think that "to" should be in there.
 * Good catch, fixed
 * "She had a cruising range of 6,000 nautical miles (11,000 km; 6,900 mi) at a speed of 10 knots (19 km/h; 12 mph); at maximum speed, this fell to 1,000 nmi (1,900 km; 1,200 mi).[4] She had a cruising range of 6,000 nautical miles (11,000 km; 6,900 mi) at a speed of 10 knots (19 km/h; 12 mph)." You've included the cruising range twice.
 * Removed
 * "Protet was built at the Forges et Chantiers de la Gironde shipyard.." Could you maybe add "near Bordeaux" to the prose here, just to give us an indication?
 * Good idea
 * "..and the United States cruiser Philadelphia." Why no USS this time? Every other UK or US ship has included them?
 * Fixed

Overall, a nice and neat article as I would expect. I'll stick this on hold. Harrias talk 08:04, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks Harrias! Parsecboy (talk) 16:22, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * With those changes, I'm happy that this meets the GA criteria. Harrias  talk 16:34, 13 July 2020 (UTC)