Talk:French destroyer Chacal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 13:11, 15 December 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * PS is, I think, the German abbreviation for metric horsepower. Is that appropriate in the infobox?
 * The French abbreviation, CV, doesn't work in the template, and since the unit is the same...
 * You could type it up by hand, but it's not that big of a deal, really.
 * "Chacal and Tigre escorted the light cruiser Primauguet to French West Africa between 13 January and 10 April 1931 and the four depth charge throwers were removed in 1932" - it seems odd to combine the trip to FWA and the removal of the depth charge throwers in a single sentence, especially since it might not be clear which ship lost the throwers.
 * Clarified, but I think that it would flow badly if I were to separate the removal into its own sentence. Alternatively, I could fold it into the following sentence since they both occur in '32 if you think that would read better.
 * Yeah, I think that might work better.
 * Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:16, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Had a look at Rohwer and the only thing that might be worth including is the fact that the French destroyers' bombardment off Boulogne-sur-Mer temporarily stopped the German advance. Up to you though.
 * I'd want to check that against a more ground-focused account before I added it.
 * Any info on when she was broken up?
 * Annoyingly no, at least not RS. Wrecksite.eu has some more info behind a paywall, but I've gotten better things to do with my money.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Why not use File:Contre-torpilleur Jaguar (1926).svg (or see if Max would translate File:Jaguar-class destroyer - General Arrangement Plans - RU.svg for you)?
 * File:Chacal-2.jpg is also available if you want to use it
 * I generally save line drawings, etc., for the class article and I'm not really sure that the other ONI photo doesn't offer anything not already visible in the infobox photo.
 * Fair enough.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Fair enough.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: