Talk:French destroyer Le Fantasque/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 22:48, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

Some minor things: That's the lot. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:50, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * link lead ship
 * perhaps pipe the link to the class to "her class" rather than just "class"
 * link French West Africa
 * explicitly state she was captured and transferred to the Free French
 * But that's just it, she wasn't.
 * Yes, I misread that, must have been thinking of a different ship... Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:25, 25 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Body
 * "aft superstructure remodeled in early to create"? missing year?
 * you could add the ordered date to the infobox
 * link L'Indomptable and L'Audacieux
 * "Central Atlantic during 7–13 November"
 * link convoy
 * "They departed Toulon on 9 September"
 * rm comma from "were removed, on 21 January 1943"
 * "return fire tha n t wounded"
 * "Le Fantasque fir ing ed 280 shells"
 * Been thinking about this and I don't think that it's incorrect. It's just like the sentence about her crew increasing during wartime.
 * See what you think.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I tweaked a couple of things you missed. All good. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:25, 25 September 2019 (UTC)