Talk:French ironclad Bouvines/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:09, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1. 2.
 * Is there a specific reason that the convention of having the subject of article in bold in the first sentence isn't done here?
 * 'Cause I'm an idiot?
 * "The crew of the Bouvines class numbered 18 officers and 318 ratings; service as a flagship added 5 more officers and 33 more ratings.[2]" - This suggests 336 and 374, the infobox states 333 and 371
 * Typo, fixed to 15 officers
 * "The Bouvines class had a full-length waterline armor belt of steel that tapered from the maximum thickness of 464 mm (18.3 in) amidships to 250 mm (9.8 in) at the ship's ends." - Infobox gives 434 for the top number.
 * "others, including Rear Admiral Chateauminois" - Is his full name known?
 * "briefly became the flagship of Rear Admiral Ménard" - Is full name known?
 * " was replaced by Rear Admiral Escande" - Ditto as above
 * I've been unable to find their first names. None of them are listed in my biographical dictionary of French admirals.
 * Referencing looks good.

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 * Licensing looks good.

7.

Placing on hold, just a few things to tighten up.
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 2 June 2020 (UTC)