Talk:French ironclad Gauloise/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 04:31, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

I will do this one. Comments to follow.

Infobox
 * There is a surplus bracket on the main armament.

Design and description
 * Ever so slight discrepancy in PS between description and infobox.
 * PS is the abbreviation for metric horsepower
 * There is also a switch between terminology here: nominal horsepower and PS - not sure if that is deliberate?
 * Two different things. Nominal was based on the bore and stroke of the engine, but PS was an actual measurement of power.
 * Ever so slight discrepancy in thickness of the conning tower sides between description and infobox.

Construction and service
 * Discrepancy in launch date between description and infobox
 * Is there a link for Northern Squadron? Would also apply to its mention in lead
 * No link yet.
 * ...many of the trained gunners aboard the squadron... suggest: "...many of the trained gunners aboard the squadron's ships..."
 * link Mediterranean Squadron
 * Linked in the lede

Other stuff That's all I found on my first run through. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:52, 19 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Image tags check out OK. A suggestion though; swap the images. I think it is better to have the image of the actual ship in the infobox rather than her sister. But that may be a personal preference and it won't affect this review if you choose not to.
 * No dupe links
 * The dablinks/external links tools don't want to work for me but on a manual check, the external links in the references check out OK
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:17, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I see one suggestion not effected, but that is pretty minor and not enough to hold this up. Passing as GA as I believe it meets the GA criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:59, 27 September 2020 (UTC)