Talk:Freshman 15/GA1

GA Review
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 * References are formatted wrong. The links shouldn't have signs around them. This creates bare URLs which are more prone to linkrot. I would recommend using Cite web templates.
 * There are large, large numbers of unreferenced sections. Just in the first two sections alone I found several places to put [citation needed] tags, and the rest is equally lacking in sources.
 * The prose is also very choppy. I would suggest taking it to WP:GOCE to clean it up.

The facts are mostly there, but the article needs a stiff copyedit, proper source formatting and overall addition of sources. Reviewer: Ten Pound Hammer, his otters and a clue-bat • (Many otters • One bat • One hammer) 02:56, 29 April 2010 (UTC)