Talk:Frieda Garcia

= Review =

Lavsam, good start! It'd be nice to get a photo, check out the WP:NOTFREE guideline. Also, what Wikipedians or WikiProjects could you reach out to for review? -Reagle (talk) 13:52, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

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 * User:AmandaRR123, any suggestions for improvement? -Reagle (talk) 13:52, 17 February 2018 (UTC)


 * User:Lavsam, I'm looking at the wonderful article you've put together in your sandbox, so will comment there. AmandaRR123 (talk) 21:07, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

= Peer Review = Lavsam I think you did a great job in adding important and relevant information to the existing article! Looking at Wikipedia's guidelines for a perfect article, I feel like this one is clear, understandable, and engaging. It also follows Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. One thing that you could do in terms of editing would be incorporating images into the article. I also feel like you could expand the personal life section a little more (maybe add information about where she attended high school/college if you can find it). I also think that the honors and award heading could be re-titled to something shorter such as just recognition and maybe rewritten in a paragraph format rather than individual sentences. At times, you are vague for instance when you say "within this time period" I would just specify more. Overall, I feel like the article is good and adheres to Wikipedia's perfect article guidelines. There are just some minor edits that you could make. Rijahmazhar (talk) 19:26, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Lavsam. Peer reviewers: Rijahmazhar.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 13:10, 18 January 2022 (UTC)