Talk:Friedrich Karl Wilhelm, Fürst zu Hohenlohe

comments
I haven't found info on his family ...yet... but I'll keep looking. Auntieruth55 (talk) 19:10, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

A couple of comments
I have done a quick review of the article and have a few suggestions/possible improvements:


 * the lead could be expanded a bit more to summarise the entire article;
 * the family section could also mention the subject's birth as currently it has only been mentioned in the lead;
 * should the Gates source (Citation # 6) be listed in the Bibliography?
 * is there anyway to align the promotion box so the text wraps around it? Currently it is causing quite a bit of whitespace;
 * in the Military office succession box at the bottom of the page there is nothing in the "Succeeded by" section, should there be?
 * in the last paragraph of the Action in the French Revolutionary Wars section there is a closed bracket ")" but no open bracket. Can you please add in the open bracket where required, or remove the closed bracket?

Anyway, that is it. Good work so far. — AustralianRupert (talk) 10:45, 29 March 2010 (UTC)