Talk:Friedrichshafen D.I/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 22:03, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Harrias (he/him) • talk 22:03, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * Only one image is used, in the infobox. The image has a suitable license and caption.
 * Consider adding alt text, but this is not a GA requirement.

Prose

 * "The Flugzeugbau Friedrichshafen, after having.." For clarity, perhaps expand this to: "The Flugzeugbau Friedrichshafen aircraft manufacturing company, after having.."
 * "..to the German Army's (Deutsches Heer Inspectorate of Flying Troops (Inspektion der Fliegertruppen) (Idflieg))." I got a bit confused with the brackets here. It feels like it should be "..to the German Army's (Deutsches Heer) Inspectorate of Flying Troops (Inspektion der Fliegertruppen) (Idflieg)."
 * "..while the second one had ones that.." The repeated "one"/"ones" here is a little clunky. I think the first could be removed.

Otherwise there isn't much to say about this short, neat article. Harrias (he/him) • talk 15:20, 6 March 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:10, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Cheers, the changes look good. Confirming the article is neutral and stable, and so meets all the GA criteria. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 22:02, 6 March 2023 (UTC)