Talk:Friend or Foe (SpongeBob SquarePants)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:14, 20 December 2013 (UTC)

Hello, Mediran, I will be reviewing this article.


 * The hatnote should be removed, per WP:NAMB.
 * ✅. Thanks for that. 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "The episode was" -> "The episode is" (it didn't suddenly stop being a special)
 * ✅. Right. 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "The episode became available on DVD on April 17, 2007. The episode received positive reviews upon release." Try to avoid repeating "The episode" here
 * 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * In the plot, you should link "flashback" the first occurence
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I think that you should remove citation 1, it's not needed. (Plots don't need citations)
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think four citations are needed for "The episode was later released on the DVD of the same name on April 17, 2007". See WP:OVERCITE
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "Paul Mavis of the DVD Talk" Drop the "the" here.
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "David Packard of the" Again, the "the" can be dropped
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "Patrick Cossel of Blogcritics, on the DVD, said" Kind of clumsy, try "On the DVD, Patrick Cossel of Blogcritics said"
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm not really seeing what citation 23 is doing (I've verified the quote comes from ref #22) so you should remove it.
 * ✅ 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)

 Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 02:14, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks Taylor Trescott! :) Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * OK, one thing; you should link Patchy The Pirate in the lead. People that aren't familiar with SpongeBob might find it confusing.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 22:38, 21 December 2013 (UTC)
 * ✅ and thanks! Mediran ( t  •  c ) 02:44, 22 December 2013 (UTC)