Talk:Frilled lizard/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:47, 15 January 2023 (UTC)


 * I've done a copyedit, feel free to point out any changes you disagree with.
 * The conservation information is crammed into a single sentence in distribution; this should be expanded into its own section, especially since the IUCN mentions a lot about the effect of the pet trade on the species.
 * Will get to. LittleJerry (talk) 19:15, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
 * , any update? AryKun (talk) 13:21, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'll get to this this weekend. LittleJerry (talk) 13:24, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * , done. LittleJerry (talk) 21:13, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


 * I've done another copyedit, mostly fixing typos and italics.
 * The cladogram doesn't mentions the scientific name of the species or the clade that it is representing; it's of limited use without this information.
 * "may weigh" → "weighs"
 * "may have black belly" → Is the color of the belly variable? If not, it should be just "males have a black belly"
 * "that may merge" → See above.
 * "Males may move around more" → "Males move around more" since you give statistics that suggest that males move around more
 * "Male lizards may assert their boundaries" → See above, presumably a frill display is the most common way of asserting territoriality.
 * Ref numbers refer to this version. Refs checked according to ref number generated by random number generator
 * Ref 12 : Verifies all claims made.
 * Ref 2 : Verifies all claims made
 * Ref 10 : Verifies cladogram
 * Ref 38 : Verifies all claims made.
 * Ref 30 : Verifies all claims made.
 * Rest of references are properly formatted and are to reliable sources, and seem to be properly used.
 * Article is well illustrated and uses properly licensed images.
 * Earwig is clear. AryKun (talk) 15:32, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Fixed all. I can't get for context for the cladogram since it would increase vastly in size. See this LittleJerry (talk) 20:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)