Talk:Fringe season 2/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GRAPPLE   X  22:17, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Done  R uby2010   comment!  01:06, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Done  R uby2010   comment!  01:06, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Done  R uby2010   comment!  01:06, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Done  R uby2010   comment!  01:06, 8 August 2011 (UTC)


 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks very much for the review! I've tried to trim down some of the longest plot summaries, but am having a difficult time going further. Some of the episodes are just too complicated to explain well in a shorter summary. How do they look now?  R uby2010   comment!  01:04, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * That's the impression I was getting, which is why I found it hard to figure out what was important. I think 6 or 7 lines is forgiveable but is there anything in "Over There" (both parts" that could be cut? If anything's more of a minor plot thread or the like. I've had another bash at it myself. Some of it's really just about economy of words, but anything else I'm lost with. Is Bell's sacrifice made to be a big plot point? If not that sentence could probably come out. If it's not feasible to squeeze them some more then I'll just pass it straight. GRAPPLE   X  01:48, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Did a little more trimming. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  02:55, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks a lot better now than it did. I'm going to go ahead and pass this. Well done, and congrats on getting the whole season promoted. Good luck with the GT! GRAPPLE   X  03:08, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! :) Feel good knowing you passed the last in this topic  R uby2010   comment!  03:11, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks a lot better now than it did. I'm going to go ahead and pass this. Well done, and congrats on getting the whole season promoted. Good luck with the GT! GRAPPLE   X  03:08, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! :) Feel good knowing you passed the last in this topic  R uby2010   comment!  03:11, 8 August 2011 (UTC)