Talk:From the Bottom of My Broken Heart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CallMe Nathan   &bull;  Talk2Me   01:33, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * Remove "the"
 * as the fifth and final single from ...Baby One More Time -> the album. You used the title already a few words ago
 * for selling over 50,000 physical units of the single -> ? Platinum is 1 million
 * setted Spears -> setted?
 * the song on the 42nd Grammy Awards -> at the
 * The whole thing ✅ - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Background

 * Again, try and tie in the sentences so it reads more fluently and flows better. Also, I feel there is more info you can add.

Composition

 * Good, but try and expand a bit


 * Hey, I've merged the two sections. They were merged before, I unmerged them because I thought there was enough info to do so. I've been searching for infos about the background and composition of the song since December, and I couldn't find anything else... Sorry... :( - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Reception

 * It didn't peak at 52, it debuted
 * ✅ - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Music video

 * Was directed
 * The video portrays Spears
 * Fix up tense issues
 * ✅ - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Live performances

 * Kitted?
 * Was wearing. - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Enormous fans? NPOV
 * Hand fans. - Sauloviegas (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)