Talk:Frozen (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 13 July 2013 (UTC)


 * General
 * Some links need dabbing
 * One dead link in red


 * Info box
 * Genres should be alphabetical


 * Lead
 * while it was produced by both along with → and it was produced in collaboration with
 * on a show → at a show
 * who deemed it an album standout, → on of whom deemed it as a standout song on the album, [I doubt every critic said it was a standout]
 * an album standout, and was labelled a masterpiece whose melodic beat and sound were described as "cinematic". → an album standout. It was described as being a masterpiece, and its melodic beat and sound were defined as "cinematic".
 * on the Billboard Hot 100, → on the United States' Billboard Hot 100,
 * Put how many her tally was with number 2 songs.
 * I'd say that she performed it on Wetten Dass too, rather than just her tours.

More to follow


 * All ✅.  Jorn  talk 00:19, 5 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Background
 * 1997 was a quiet year for Madonna. → This is unbelievably bias and not encyclopaedic. This needs to be removed.
 * After she gave birth to her daughter, Lourdes, the previous year, she enrolled in → After Madonna gave birth to her daughter Lourdes, in 1997, she enrolled in
 * These incidents inspired Madonna a lot, as she began introspecting herself. → The singer was inspired by these activities, as she began introspecting herself.
 * The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks.
 * A bad quality snipped of the track was leaked → A low quality snippet of "Frozen" was leaked
 * All ✅


 * Composition
 * According to the sheet music from Alfred Publishing, → Redundant info
 * F3 is lower than Ab3 (G#3), so not sure what's going on here?
 * subtexts have been noticed. → Like?
 * All ✅


 * Plagiarism case
 * The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks.


 * Music video
 * Madonna thought that there is a lot of magical, mystical powers in a desert and is a magical place to be. → Madonna thought that there are a lot of magical, mystical powers in the desert and that it is a magical place to be.
 * The block quote shouldn't have quotation marks. Besides, the quote box on the left is disrupting the block quote, as it just looks like a normal paragraph. Having a quote box, a picture or an audio file on the left hand side next to a block quote never works, as it doesn't allow for the block quote to be indented. I would remove the quote box and just make it normal prose.
 * All ✅


 * Certifications
 * I'd update the format of the box to one like this. It's a lot more clear.


 * References
 * There is a red link on the "Vorrath, Armin (2011). Eine außersinnliche Odyssee zu Madonna. Books on Demand."

On hold —  AARON  &bull; TALK   11:50, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Thanks for the review.  Jorn  talk 21:13, 10 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   10:07, 11 August 2013 (UTC)