Talk:Frozen II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Comments? . Wingwatchers (talk) 05:37, 12 July 2021 (UTC)


 * He'll likely add them later. Just keep an eye out . Pamzeis (talk) 05:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add alt text to the poster and the image in #Animation.


 * In the infobox, does "screenplay by" need a source?
 * ... no, it's credited. Should I remove it?
 * Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:52, 14 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "in in-universe" - bit repetitive


 * "in-universe perspective chronological timeline" - kinda wordy


 * "fan's aspiration" - should be plural, right?


 * "The film is notably darker tone and heavier in computer effects" "The film contains a notably darker tone and is heavier in computer effects"

Plot and cast

 * "Afterwards" "Afterward" (American English)


 * That's it. No issues with #Cast.

Production and marketing

 * Did some copy-editing here and removed some long quotes.

Release

 * As seen in this GA-article, add a subsection titled #Theatrical.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:49, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "46 languages ... four more than the first film, which was ... 42" - bit repetitive
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Following upon the success" "Following the success"
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "digital HD" should be written as "Digital HD"
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Blu-Ray" "Blu-ray"
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "included" "include" (still available)
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add hyphens between "behind the scenes".
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Put quotation marks around "Multi-Language Reel".
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "songs performance" - reword
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * as well as multiple deleted songs: "Home" and "I Wanna Get This Right", and "Intro"; and removed footages: "Prologue", "Secret Room", "Had Nokks" and "A Place of Our Own" as well as deleted music and footage (the "quoted" scenes don't really mean much to readers)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:54, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "It was initially" "The film was initially"
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "to released" "to be released"
 * ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Wikilink D-Box.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 00:51, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "$42.2 million" "$42.4 million"


 * "$130.3 million" "$130.7 million"


 * Add a comma after the first use of "second weekend".


 * "$85.6 million" "$85.2 million"


 * Add a hyphen between "highest grossing".


 * What source does "India ($3.1 million)" come from?
 * Is actually Mexico based on a source from Deadline Hollywood. ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 02:15, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The PostTrak score needs a source.
 * It is already cited with the Deadline Hollywood source, Postrack is not a website. Some with a featured article, Atlantis: The Lost Empire. ✔️ Wingwatchers (talk) 02:19, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I know that. The PostTrak score is not featured in that article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:28, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
 * . Pamzeis (talk) 11:55, 15 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The recipients in #Accolades should be sorted by last name using this template.