Talk:Fruit pit carving

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Nice subject; Some comments!
 * please check interpunction. always place a space before a (and a space after a, so:
 * this is ok (like this); this is not ok(like this)
 * this is good reference, but this is not ok
 * this is ok; number 1 .... this is not ok ; number one

Good luck; don't hesitate to ask questions if you need! L.tak (talk) 20:55, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
 * finish the sentences that have now "..."
 * references from baidu can not be used on wikipedia. it is important to find other references. When you make a reference, make a translation of the title in English between brackets; add the source (website etc) and if possible: the author.
 * How do we know that fruit carving began 700BC, but the earlies record is of 1000 AD?
 * think about plurals in the first sentence ...imageS like fishing boatS, etc...
 * what is arhat?
 * For the classification section, references ar needed
 * Never use "you" in an encyclopedia. Use passive voice instead (it is possible to view ....)
 * Making the carves of a boat, including a poem. How is this possible? Is this true? or a fairy tale?
 * When you use dynasty indications of time (late Qing etc), always provide a year-range. Most readers are not familar at all with Chinese dynasties...