Talk:Fu Wuji/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 23:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Praseodymium-141 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * There are no images - are there any available?
 * The Treatise on Administrative Geography in the Book of the Later Han quotes the Dongguan Hanji as saying "in the first year of Yongxing (153), there were 3,681 xiang (鄉) and 12,443 ting (亭)". The mention of the date implies that the quotation cannot be from Fu Wuji and Huang Jing's work. Either this quotation was never part of a Treatise of Geography, or Fu Wuji's work was brought up to date from time to time. The Siku Quanshu editors, who collected fragments of the Dongguan Hanji from various sources, assigned another quotation with an even later date to the Treatise on Geography: "In the twentieth year of Jian'an (215), Hanning Commandery was reestablished." - I don't understand how this is relevant.
 * There are a lot of vocabulary that are not really understandable to a casual reader: fief, terrestrial portents, tabooed.
 * This article is not very long - is there any more that is known about Fu Wuji?
 * Address the lead too short tag.

Here are some comments to work on.  141 Pr  -\ contribs /- 07:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)