Talk:Fuego (Eleni Foureira song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this one now! --K. Peake 06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "who also wrote it with" → "who also served as co-writers with" to avoid overusage of it
 * "It was released it as a" → "It was released as a" but shouldn't the initial Greek release be mentioned here too?
 * "its lyrics addressing" → "the lyrics addressing"
 * Where is the nation's best result part sourced?
 * Shouldn't it be "positive" or "generally positive" since there is not enough reviews to support universal acclaim?
 * Instead of adding the word Spanish before the organization's name, add afterwards that the certification was in Spain
 * "and first uploaded to the Panik's" → "and first uploaded to Panik's"

Background and composition

 * Shouldn't the Greece release be mentioned before the various countries since that was initial?
 * Where is the English language part sourced?
 * "have inside them."" → "have inside them"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "and strength, with an" → "and strength[, with] an" per paraphrasing of the quote
 * "love and more."" → "love and more"."

Reception

 * Start a new para for the commercial reception
 * "on record charts, after its" → "on record charts after its"

Promotion and other usage

 * "Malta, Netherlands, Sweden" → "Malta, the Netherlands, Sweden"
 * The Fama A Bailar and Los40 Music Awards performances are not sourced
 * Mention at the start of the several artists sentence something like them all being Eurovision contestants for relevancy
 * Lowercase the Black Mamba per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "of the reality talent show of" → "of the reality talent show"

Before Lisbon

 * "Prior to that," → "Prior to this,"
 * "Eleni Foureira with the song "Fuego" was" → "Foureira with "Fuego" was"
 * "in Lisbon, saying "I would" → "in Lisbon, saying: "I would"
 * "all of these years"." → "all of these years."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences

In Lisbon

 * Img looks good!
 * "the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per MOS:NUM
 * What is the usage of [54] exactly?
 * I moved it to the relevant position. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:34, 25 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Should it be created by lasers instead of laser lights?
 * "[...] and a cross" → "[and] a cross" per the actual paraphrasing
 * Italicise HuffPost
 * Remove pipe on Billboard and only use the surname Adams per him already having been introduced
 * "Steve Holden described it" → "Steve Holden described the performance as"
 * "and labelled it a" → "and labelled the act a"
 * "elaborated that "given the" → "elaborated, "Given the"
 * "some red-hot dance moves"." → "some red-hot dance moves."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * I don't think the Spanish Airplay and Swedish Heatseekers charts should be included when the main ones are for those countries

Year-end charts

 * Pipe Plötutíóindi to Music of Iceland

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice job on this one! --K. Peake 08:43, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi hope you're good. I've responded to all of your concerns. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:41, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, great work from you and I only had to do copy editing in some areas! --K. Peake 06:55, 26 September 2022 (UTC)