Talk:Furniture & Meat/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:31, 21 March 2015 (UTC)

Ok, one review coming up:


 * Plot: You don't typically need citations in a plot section as it'll be referenced by the episode itself. But it isn't hurting anything, so leave it in there.
 * I included the citation as it references the bit about the spoofing of Robin Hood (it's not explicitly stated in the episode). 23W


 * Production: You should cite that footnote with a citation using Template:Cite episode for clarity. That way it'll be properly referenced.
 * Done. 23W


 * "Stamped with the production code "1025-171", the storyboard was then sent back to Osborne, for any final feedback, and to the network, for any final notes; the network approved it three weeks later." - that's a bit of a run on sentence. Is there any way it could be broken up into two sentences rather than using all those commas?
 * Replaced the semicolon with a period. 23W


 * Broadcast and reception: "June 19, 2014" - that date format needs a comma following it.
 * Done. 23W


 * No duplicate links.

That should be it. Otherwise this covers all the major points and will be good to go for GA. Miyagawa (talk) 10:31, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Oof! Sorry for not seeing this! I'll try to respond to these as soon as I can. 23W 05:30, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Howsit look? 23W 16:57, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry, missed the second ping! It all looks good now, happy to pass for GA. Miyagawa (talk) 10:32, 3 April 2015 (UTC)