Talk:Future (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:28, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox
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 * Remove dancehall (see more on background and composition section)
 * Reggae → Roots reggae (same as preivous)

Lead

 * song recorded by American → song by American
 * and American rapper → featuring American rapper (it is not a duet)
 * for Madonna's → from her
 * The song was written → The track was written
 * as a reggae, hip hop and dancehall track → see below
 * catchy...forgettable → "catchy"..."forgettable"
 * Didn't understand what you meant? Alex reach me! 21:23, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * You took this from the reception portion, these are the words from various critics. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:13, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Excuse me, ; I have corrected this last point (with Alex's permission of course); let me know if it works. Thank you both--Christian (talk) 15:36, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

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Background and composition
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 * The image of Diplo seems unecessary, the caption is already on the secont paragraph of the article and there are already two images on this small article.
 * who served as → who was a
 * Regarding the genre of the songs the dancehall is according to Idolator is "dancehall-tinged", so the track is heavily influenced by it and not a genre. Gay Times also claims the same for the reggae beat, "Reggae-tinged", however the Guardian author says "Future is her go at pop’s next big trend, roots reggae", so change reggae to roots reggae + wikilik. Nevetherless, if you can find sources claiming the afomerementioned genres they can stay.
 * Due to preivous explanation "It is a roots reggae and hip hop song, heavily influenced by dancehall.[5][7][8]"
 * Plugged In setence remove per not being a reliable source as it bias towards social conservative and religious views

Reception

 * darkness hangs heavy [on the album] [...] present even on the bobbing reggae of 'Future' → this would be better fit on the above section. It doesn't state if he liked or disliked the track, its just a descreption of the track.
 * Where is this?
 * I removed it as I thought it wasn't relevant enough; it's already stated that it's a reggae song Alex reach me! 21:22, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

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 * Entertainment Weekly and Financial Times → same as previous
 * Moreover, these three source add to the genre of the song. bobbing reggae and dancehall flavour → influence, with EW calling it a "dancehall jam". The Idolator review of Madame X also cails it " dancehall-lite", so I'm sure its influenced by dancehall
 * Writing for Gay Times, → positive review
 * sell the song → sell the track
 * On France's singles download chart, the song reached number 16, On the UK Singles Downloads Chart, the track reached number 33 → The track peaked at number 16 and 33, on the French Digital and UK Download charts, respectively.
 * the song debuted → the track debuted
 * Why not a mnetion of Euro Digital?
 * The image of Quavo should be in the beggining of the section.

Live performances
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 * Should't this be on chronologial order?
 * ....The appearance was officially...Madonna performed "Future"...
 * Madonna then included "Future" → Madonna included "Future"

Credits and personnel
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 * Use so there is the right space between the personnel and credits

Charts

 * Use Template:Single chart for the UK Downloads, Scotland, Hungary, France and Euro Digital Songs entries.
 * The France Downloads link is dead, therefore it can't be replaced Alex reach me! 15:19, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Right. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:01, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

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Overall

 * You can now address the issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:24, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. Take a look. Alex reach me! 12:38, 25 May 2020 (UTC)