Talk:Future Launchers Preparatory Programme

Rik ISS-fan (talk) 22:34, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Needed modifications
Thanks to everyone that has helped to improve this wiki. This discussion topic is supposed to make moderating easier. State the improvements that have to be made in the form of a bullet list. Thanks for your help. Rik ISS-fan (talk) 16:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review
I've completely renewed this wiki, so I request for a total review. Including Class and Importance evaluation. Rik ISS-fan (talk) 22:34, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

I think this article deserves a C- or B-class rating. And the following Importance ratings: For spaceflight: MID; for ESA taskforce: HIGH or TOP ; for EU: LOW to MID Rik ISS-fan (talk) 23:04, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Proposed new page structure
This page was classed as 'stub' because of that I want to drastically update this page. I propose the following structure:

Introduction:


 * Purpose
 * Program planning
 * Program outline (what it entails)
 * NGL

- Launcher concepts (6 launcher concepts made) - Propulsion technology - Structure technology
 * Ariane 5 ME
 * IXV
 * Political Discussion and other difficulties
 * Resent developments
 * See also
 * Reference
 * External links   — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.45.231.141 (talk) 16:01, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

(Modifications to above by Rik ISS-fan (talk) 17:03, 23 June 2012 (UTC))

Consistent English variant
Since you obviously have chosen to use the British English style (ex.: Programme in the page title), which is fine, I'm just curious as to why you're being inconsistent and using the American program in the text? Articles are supposed to use a consistent English style, once chosen. (See MOS:ENGVAR and WP:CONSISTENCY.) JustinTime55 (talk) 18:03, 9 November 2012 (UTC)

Assessment
Clean up some of the prose, its a little rough. I can specify if you need to, but its not very good throughout the article.

Cite every bullet point in main objectives.

Cite every paragraph in Approach.

Cite the collaboration paragraph.

Cite information in Structure.

Cite info in Inception.

Cite Period 1, Period 2 Step 1 and Step 2.

Cite every paragraph in Projects and in Coordination with other programmes.

Delete items in the See Also section that are already linked in the prose of the article.

Remove external links that are already included in the inline citations.

There are some images that could add to this article; add at least one.

Can't review criteria b2 until criteria b1 is satisfied better.

Start class for now.

Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks! Kees08 (talk) 19:41, 3 December 2016 (UTC)