Talk:Göran Lagerberg/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Although optional, you can add and  at the top of the page. Infobox is properly set-up.
 * Unlink the third-party link from Blond in the lede. The rest of the lede satisfies the criteria.
 * "Always being musically interested, he started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson." → As a kid, he was interested into music and started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson.
 * My recommendation would be to group a couple of sections: Under a new section called "Music career" you should put "Tages" (remove early years and later years subsections), "Blond", "1970s and 1980s" and "Grymlings".
 * Missing end quote in the first sentence under "Early years" section. → "he was the only guy insane enough to play the washboard".
 * "Unlike many other Swedish groups, who had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each was allowed at least one lead vocal per show, often harmonizing." → Unlike many other Swedish groups, who only had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each allowed to lead the vocals at least once per one show, often harmonizing.
 * "...wasted on a flexi disc, thanks to Lagerberg's talent." – are you sure that this is meant to say wasted?
 * Missing comma between November and Tages in the "In November Tages third studio album Extra Extra was released." sentence.
 * Add "to" between Parlophone and expire in the "...allowing their contract with Parlophone expire..." sentence.
 * Unbold "Blond" in the "Blond" section.
 * Uncapitalize progressive rock in the "The group came out of the Mecki Mark Men and initially had a Progressive rock sound." sentence.
 * Move the end quote on the left side of the period in the "..."one of the 50 best Svensktopp-songs of all time."" sentence.

Images

 * File:Göran Lagerberg, sång.JPG is tagged as own work. Please find a source and if the image is suitable for Commons. If you don't, remove it from the article and nominate it for deletion.
 * File:Henkan 70, 2015.jpg same issue.