Talk:G.G. (Gossip Girl)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:01, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Top: Add the DISPLAYTITLE template at the top to italic Gossip Girl, as it is a television series
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: No need for "The CW" in the infobox
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Image Caption: "Blair and Louis' wedding day arrives in the show's 100th episode." This is suppose to say what is in image, not 100th episode overall. How about: "Blair and Louis' get married." Or something like that. Thanks
 * ✅ I put what you wrote ;-) Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Image Caption: "The St. James' Episcopal Church saw the wedding taking place" What does that mean
 * ✅ Reworded Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: the show's 100th overall → the show's 100th episode overall
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: ""G.G" revolves around the wedding of Blair Waldorf (Leighton Meester) to Prince Louis Grimaldi (Hugo Becker)." Maybe switch that up a bit so it doesn't sound like an ad
 * I changed the sentence a bit but I don't know if it's what you want Sofffie7 (talk) 08:38, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

That's all. On hold. TBrandley 16:15, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Remove ""G.G" makes Gossip Girl the first series that premiered on The CW to hit 100 episodes." It already says "the show's 100th overall" at the top
 * ✅ I know it sounds redundant but it was to note that Gossip Girl was the very first CW series to reach that amount of episodes; other series were cancelled before or have not yet reached the 100 episodes... Nonetheless, I have removed the sentence Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: Expand to show what fully happened in episode for the 44 minutes
 * ✅ Do you think it is OK that way? Sofffie7 (talk) 08:14, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Music: Per guidelines, try to write the music in a few sentences, rather than a bulleted list
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Critical reception: Digital Spy should be in italics
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 3 - Yahoo! TV. Remove that source. Yahoo! TV isn't a good source for Wikipedia
 * ✅ I changed it but I also erased the part about the editor since it isn't supported by the new source. Sofffie7 (talk) 21:00, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 4 - Huffington Post should be The Huffington Post
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 7 - That is a dead link, as I see here Please archive it, replaced it, or remove it
 * ✅ Removed Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: For Internet Movie Database and TV.com links, it should be "G.G" not "G.G. (Gossip Girl)"
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: Missing quoteation marks for The CW link
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: The CW should be cwtv.com. Still, link to The CW Television Network
 * ✅ Sofffie7 (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing. I've tried to address all the issues you mentioned. --Sofffie7 (talk) 08:38, 11 July 2012 (UTC)