Talk:GO Transit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 14:23, 16 January 2017 (UTC)

Hi, I'm MrWooHoo. I'd like to quickly explain how I'll be reviewing this article. I will do a general review (checking the criteria), then doing an in-depth prose and source review. Thanks! Mr WooHoo ( T  •  C ) 14:25, 16 January 2017 (UTC)

Earwig shows that this article is 47% of the same content as the WP article. Please fix any copyright violations ASAP or correct me if I'm wrong.
 * Many of the items picked up in the link provided are proper names/titles (Ontario Minister of Transportation and Communications, Greater Toronto and Hamilton Area), names in combination with years ("in the 1970s and 1980s") or items with limited variability for description ("the introduction of the Georgetown...line in 1974, and the Richmond Hill line in 1978"; "concourse at Union Station was built"). I made a couple changes, but otherwise do not see copyvio concerns given what I have described. -- Natural  R X 17:26, 30 January 2017 (UTC)

Prose Review
Note: If you have changed the sentence that needed to be corrected, press Enter and start off the line with, then use ✅ or ✅ If the change was only partially done use, and or ❌ if the change could not occur. (If you would explain why, I would be greatly appreciated :P) To see code, go to edit source and copy the code.


 * "Improvements include new roof and glass atrium" - Add "a" before new.


 * "covering the tracks platforms" - tracks', not track's
 * "tracks" was removed entirely, sentence was changed to now read: "Improvements include a new roof and glass atrium covering the platforms and railway tracks, [listing other improvements]..."


 * "They include amenities such as elevators, washrooms, parking, pay phones, ticket vending machines, ticket sale kiosks and automated teller machines. " - Make sure throughout the article that you either always use the serial comma (the comma before and), or just don't use it.


 * "Fares on the network are based a zone tariff set " - Add on before "a".


 * "The Presto system allows passengers to load a re-loadable card " - Remove the hyphen.

Source Review

 * Reference 65 is dead, so I would fix it for preparation for FA.
 * I successfully loaded the source, please confirm you are referring to this source.

Nominator's comment on logo concerns by the reviewer
File:GO_Transit_logo.svg is indeed a trademarked logo. However, I think it has been tagged appropriately and is still eligible for use on Commons. I still believe the threshold of originality rationale has not been met by this logo. Furthermore, trademark has also been added to the page, alerting users that despite not having copyright status, it may be subject to other restrictions. I believe this is in line with other logos and guidance on the Commons. -- Natural  R X 15:34, 31 January 2017 (UTC)
 * All concerns have been addressed, the article now passes GA criteria. Congratulations! Mr WooHoo  ( T  •  C ) 03:01, 1 February 2017 (UTC)
 * thank you for your review sir! Your review format is great. -- Natural  R X 15:17, 1 February 2017 (UTC)