Talk:Gabriele Muccino

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Possible Article Improvements
Overall I think this article looks really good! I think one change it might benefit from is to split the "Life and Career" section into two separate sections. As it is, it is a very long section that focuses mostly on career anyways, so I think making a separate "Life" section with more detail about Gabriele outside of his work in film could be helpful to make a more well-rounded article. Maybe include any details about places he has lived, gone to school, and his family in the new section.

On a separate note, I also noticed that 5 of the 6 listed references are the same, it mght be a good idea to re-use the same citation for each time you have an in-text citation rather than creating a new one each time if it is the same reference being used. This will just help to clean up the look of the reference section.

Again like I said, I think overall it is really good. The writing is easy to follow and pleasant to read, job well done. Get1432 (talk) 04:52, 16 November 2015 (UTC)

I agree with what the above person stated. I think the article flowed really well and there was a ton of information to learn about this film maker. This was also easy for the reader to understand based on how the information was chunked. There was also good flow between paragraphs that helped the reader out. Overall I thought this was also really good. ````Lauren Zazzarino — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laurenzazzarino (talk • contribs) 21:45, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

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