Talk:Gael Greene

Please — no guessing games!
Many parts of this article read as though they were written by a publicist for the article's subject. For example:

"Given the spotlight of New York, the first city magazine, her writing gave New Yorkers a new way to think about dining out—as theater, as seduction, as social competition—and both inspired and documented the city's growing interest in food and dining out."

Even if that were not the case, such a sentence is appropriate only for a bad newspaper, and certainly not for Wikipedia.

No guessing games, please! Just tell us in what publication she wrote her (main body of) restaurant columns.

In general, I suggest simple declarative sentences that actually state what they are intended to say.Daqu (talk) 11:08, 30 November 2015 (UTC)