Talk:Gagak Item/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 19:19, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

On it. -- Khazar2 (talk) 19:19, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

Made just one tweak; please feel free to revert if you disagree.

More:
 * " the H. Dumas' musical troupe Lief Java" -- seems like this should be either "H. Dumas' musical troupe" or "the H. Dumas musical troupe"?
 * You're right, done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:33, 10 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "was premiered" -- I'm never sure on this usage, but would it be better to say simply "Gagak Item premiered"?
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:33, 10 March 2013 (UTC)