Talk:Galeote Pereira

Tone notice
I've added a tone notice to the Other notable elements section; thought I'd explain my concerns. I'm not sure what's meant by "Polo had found the social situation of the practice [male homosexual sex] no more troubled under the Mongol-ruled Yuan", so I don't know how to rewrite it. The judgement in the following paragraph on which elements of the text "surprise us" is also a bit POV, but I think I can see what it's driving at - does the original contributor fancy trying a rewrite? Gonzonoir (talk) 11:29, 16 January 2009 (UTC)