Talk:Galloway cattle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 17:34, 19 September 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

: Comments below,
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Issues
--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:45, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
 * The lead seems a little bit too short. It should be expanded upon.✅
 * One dead link.✅
 * Some of the refs could be expanded upon.✅
 * Footnote #2 only needs to externally link the title, not the whole cite.✅
 * "BSE", please expand it on first usage✅
 * "dun", wrong link, pipe it to "dun gene"✅
 * serveral statements may be not neutral, for example: "great debate".
 * "17th Century", decapitalize century.✅
 * Link "dun" on first usage✅
 * Are you sure the article' can't be expanded any further?
 * average galloway cow, capitalize "Galloway"✅
 * Inconsistency: "herd book" and "herdbook"✅
 * What does "herdbook" mean?✅
 * Fix hyphens with dashes, which are found on the bottom of the page in the "Insert" section when you edit. - I cant seem to find this! Do you mind doing this? TheMagikCow (talk) 16:17, 24 September 2015 (UTC)✅
 * to an entire region of Scotland, the source specifically states "south-west Scotland".✅
 * Source #6 states the origin of the word "Galloway".
 * Add citation #6 to it.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 20:19, 24 September 2015 (UTC)✅
 * Source#6 does not state what it cites on it's first usage✅
 * Sorry to be a pain, but what does this specifically mean? TheMagikCow (talk) 10:27, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Source #7does not state what it cites✅
 * Source #8 doesn't state what it cites✅
 * Source #9 doesn't state what it cites✅
 * Should mention it also comes in "dun" color in the Infobox✅
 * Link "Scotland" and "Australia" in the body.✅
 * Note requires a reference.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 20:19, 24 September 2015 (UTC)✅
 * Any population stats?✅
 * Please can you expand on the 6,7 and 8 points for sourcing. TheMagikCow (talk) 16:26, 30 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Passing, Well done.Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:08, 10 October 2015 (UTC)