Talk:Galtymore/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:19, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

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Thanks for this TRM ! I clean this up post the other GAN reviews so hopefully in better shape. I was able to change the columns of the table per the MOS:ACCESS point earlier, but the rows did not work for me (I was not able to format right). If you could show me how hte first two rows would work, I will fill in the rest. I will clean up the Philip Treacy article now, so better if you started with this one first? thanks. Britishfinance (talk) 17:17, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 17:22, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I have made all those changes below. Hope that works? Britishfinance (talk) 15:38, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it for now, so it's on hold. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:20, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I would work to remove the references from the lead, and make sure all the information is mentioned and expanded upon in the main part of the article.
 * The height in the lead is rounded and therefore the conversion to feet is different from there to the infobox.
 * "+10–hour" I guess this means "at least 10 hour-"? but I'm not sure.
 * PW Joyce -> P. W. Joyce.
 * "The geology of the Galty Mountains are described" geology is singular here, so "is" described, isn't it?
 * " Silurian Shales" sea of blue and shale isn't normally capitalised.
 * "by tors built of conglomerate rock " built of seems odd in this context, aren't they naturally formed?
 * ✅, changed to "formed from" as more natural
 * "with deep corries and" link corrie here instead of "of deep corries, most of"
 * "purple sandstone" is mentioned in the infobox, nowhere else.
 * ✅, infobox now says purple-reddish, per Geology section.
 * "by loughs. Lough Diheen" repetitive lough usage.
 * ("SMC") no need for quotes.
 * "10–hour" hyphen.
 * "The MountainViews Online Database list" overlinked. Twice.
 * I would also allow the table caption to be centrally aligned.
 * Row scopes would be great on the names. Copy the way I demonstrated last time (I think).
 * ✅, thanks
 * Translation sorting is a bit odd because it's basically free text, but things like "quote marks" mess it up even more.
 * "the eastern-cairn" not sure this needs hyphenation but also repetitive.
 * "over 4 years" more than four years.
 * ("SEMRA") again, not in quotes.
 * "1922.[4][6] [13]" remove space.
 * " PW Joyce suggests" P. W.
 * "the NW of" northwest.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * I would also allow the table caption to be centrally aligned.
 * Row scopes would be great on the names. Copy the way I demonstrated last time (I think).
 * ✅, thanks
 * Translation sorting is a bit odd because it's basically free text, but things like "quote marks" mess it up even more.
 * "the eastern-cairn" not sure this needs hyphenation but also repetitive.
 * "over 4 years" more than four years.
 * ("SEMRA") again, not in quotes.
 * "1922.[4][6] [13]" remove space.
 * " PW Joyce suggests" P. W.
 * "the NW of" northwest.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * "1922.[4][6] [13]" remove space.
 * " PW Joyce suggests" P. W.
 * "the NW of" northwest.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * "the NW of" northwest.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * All good. I made a  few minor tweaks, but passed to GA.  Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:59, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks again TRM. Britishfinance (talk) 16:00, 16 April 2020 (UTC)