Talk:Gaming Chair

Round 1 feedback
Hey, I'm glad to see the progress you've made on your article so far. You've added a paragraph about the relationship between the rise of Twitch's popularity and the popularity of gaming chairs and descriptions of different styles of chairs. While it seems like you have found reliable sources about the different kinds of chairs, I don't see you citing a source about the connection to Twitch. I don't think the claims you made in that paragraph are controversial or likely to attract pushback, but it's better if they can be verified in a reliable source.

I also suggest that this article would be made a lot better with the inclusion of a photograph. If you or one of your friends has an exemplary gaming chair, you might take a photo of it and upload it to WP:commons and then you can include it in your article.

Good work so far. I think you've really made some substantial improvements to the article already and I'm excited to see how you will develop it further! Groceryheist (talk) 23:44, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

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I posted a peer review for you! Jeffdnguyen921 (talk) 12:48 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Round 2 feedback
Greetings, has left you helpful feedback on your article (link.  He suggested that your lead can do a better job providing an overview of the material the article will cover, and I agree.  He also pointed out that you seem to have a duplicate reference that you should fix.  Also, like I suggested in my previous round of feedback (above) he suggested that adding an image would be a great improvement to the article.

When you started working on this article it was a wp:stub and your work so far has brought it almost all the way to wp:start-class. I think that improving the article with an image and more polished writing will probably get it over the line. I think that the history section can also probably be developed some more. You might not need any new sources to do this, but you might find the how-to guide on mining sources for information useful as you expand the discussion of the information you've added so far.

I think you're pretty close to being ready to polish and publish your article by integrating your changes with the live article in mainspace. As a next step, I suggest you take a look at my page on polishing your article for ideas for your next round of work on this project. I especially think that doing things like adding wikilinks, "also see" links, categories, and external links are good things to do when polishing an article. I also suggest that you spend some time carefully copyediting the information you've already added to make it as easy to read as possible while maintaining an wp:encyclopedic tone.

Nice work on your article so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing what it will be like when you're done with it. Groceryheist (talk) 23:36, 4 February 2021 (UTC)