Talk:Gang Bang (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:42, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * Add "recorded" in between "song" and "by"
 * Shouldn't it be "singer and songwriter"?
 * I don't think you have to include "Although not released as a single"
 * American English: "criticised" → "criticized"
 * "While working on her then-upcoming album" → You should probably include the name of the album since it isn't mentioned at all except in the lead
 * I don't think "hits" is really encyclopedic
 * "Among the songs recorded for the album, "Gang Bang" was confirmed to be part of the track listing." → When was it confirmed? And source?
 * Since Tarantino has done a good handful of films (with almost all of them being blockbuster films), you probably can remove Pulp Fiction altogether; this would sound better in a magazine
 * "Shot you dead, shot my lover in the head... I'm going straight to hell... I've got a lot of friends there," --> Should the "..." be "/" instead?
 * "MTV News's" --> "MTV News'"
 * "X. Alender" → Says differently in the source
 * "The song received positive critical feedback." --> This sounds redundant to me :/
 * Already linked The Guardian
 * "Although it was not released as a single, " --> Same as before
 * I don't think you need to link "setlist"
 * "Good Morning America" should be italicized
 * "Dexter" should be italicized
 * Great job as always. On hold to address these few and minor issues. Carbrera (talk) 03:31, 7 September 2016 (UTC).
 * Dealing with this today. — I B  [ Poke ] 10:24, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * , all done. — I B  [ Poke ] 09:50, 13 September 2016 (UTC)