Talk:Ganting Grand Mosque/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 07:11, 1 September 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Too many occassions of "mosque" in the lead. Suggest you replace some with "building", etc
 * Trimmed two
 * "Since it was established," - it refers to what? And perhaps reword to "Since its reconstruction"
 * Followed immediately by "the mosque", reworded slightly
 * Maybe link Malaysia, Saudi Arabia, and Egypt (I see it more often that people delink countries, perhaps a new trend)
 * I generally don't link countries (especially well-known ones like Saudi Arabia and Egypt)
 * Non-muslims will wonder why the chamber is cube-shaped. Perhaps state that it was possibly influenced by the Kaaba
 * I'll check the sources
 * Been unable to find coverage of that, or proof that it really is a cube (a 30m ceiling would be quite impressive, methinks)
 * Also, what denomination of Islam? --Kürbis (✔) 07:35, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Added to the lede, as most will not know that Indonesia is pretty much entirely Sunni.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Nice as usual--Kürbis (✔) 07:35, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Nice as usual--Kürbis (✔) 07:35, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail: