Talk:Garni Temple/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 06:54, 2 April 2015 (UTC)


 * " triangular cliff" - what triangular cliff? I mean the name or something like that.
 * The cliff does not seem to have a special name.


 * "castellum Gorneas" - if it was the name, then please make C capital.
 * The C in castellum is not capitalized in the original source (Khatchadourian 2008). In any case, I've removed castellum because it doesn't add any value, it's just Latin for castle.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 13:40, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * "Movses Khorenatsi" - who is he?
 * Clarified.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 15:46, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
 * "Mennieay" and "Amateay" - their sudden introduction seems strange.
 * They are mentioned in an inscription and their titles are provided within brackets.


 * "Most scholars now" - Weasel words.
 * How is "Most scholars" a weasel word"? Clichés and idioms section clearly says "...use a term such as all, most, or two-thirds."

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 04:10, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Grigor Tananyan - was he a historian?
 * He's a philosopher, but he seems to have written extensively on history.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 05:39, 13 April 2015 (UTC)