Talk:Gaskell Romney

The introduction as it relates to his Father.
I'm not very good at revising these things, but this introduction needs help. The first paragraph is almost entirely about Gaskell's Father and it virtually makes no sense. The second sentence is a run on for no reason. It mentions him marrying his first wife and his second, but no mention of his third wife until it is stated "Miles Park Romney and his three wives," If the marrying of the first two is mentioned, why not the third? Moreover, Miles was married to five women according to his wiki page. I'm not sure if there is enough in the article to warrant an entire page if you remove the bit about his father. However, if it is to be kept up, the introduction should surely be edited.

Kangolcone (talk) 20:21, 21 May 2012 (UTC)

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