Talk:Gavin Mahon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 19:49, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll have a look at this one too, will post review shortly. Kosack (talk) 19:49, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

Initial review:

Infobox

 * Is there a source for his full name?

Lead

 * "although did not make any first-team appearances for the club", I'm thinking it should be although he...?
 * "although did not making any appearances for the club", similar issue a bit further down for his Palace spell.
 * Link first mention of Notts County and Stevenage.

Watford

 * Link Ray Lewington.
 * "As soon as I knew as Watford were interested", a stray as in there.
 * Change Sunderland and Hull City links to A.F.C. rather than F.C. to avoid redirects.

Tamworth

 * Perhaps add a short line about retiring? Both the lead and the personal life section mention retiring but there's no mention of it in the career text.

Honours

 * Using semi-colons should be avoided, simply use bold text for headings per WP:PSEUDOHEAD and WikiProject Football/Players.
 * Middle individual award is unsourced.