Talk:Ge rum i Bröllopsgåln din hund!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

You do have a good amount of GANs up; here's another review from me! --K. Peake 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:59, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Lead

 * What exactly makes the img relevant here?
 * Contemporary image of just such a scene in Bellman's Stockholm.
 * Remove comma after the brackets
 * Done.
 * Like last time, the best-known and best-loved songs info should not be in the opening sentence; instead, mention that it is Epistle No. 40 them from his 1790 collection
 * Done.
 * Add a sentence mentioning the pattern of the verses here
 * Done.
 * "with soldiers mixed up" → "where soldiers mixed up"
 * Done.
 * The subtitle is not sourced anywhere in the body
 * Added.
 * Remove musicologist introduction to James Massengale since this being in the body is sufficient
 * Done.
 * Maybe add what writers actually praised about the song and if any of the covers are notable enough, mention them here
 * Added.

Context

 * Pipe King Gustav III to Gustav III on the img text
 * Done.
 * [1] should be solely at the end of the sentence
 * Moved.
 * "from drinking songs to" → "such as drinking songs and"
 * Done.
 * "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
 * Done.

Music and verse form

 * Like last time, add text for the audio sample to comply with WP:NFCCP
 * Done.
 * "each of 14 lines." → "each consisting of 14 lines."
 * Done.
 * Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
 * Done.
 * Img looks good!
 * Thanks!

Lyrics

 * "the soldiers; the chimney" → "the soldiers. Meanwhile, the chimney" to avoid an overly long sentence, as the voiced parts can be separate from the rest anyway
 * Split.
 * Start box looks good!
 * Noted.

Reception

 * Pipe musicologist to Musicology
 * Done.
 * "and divisions of the music" → "and divisions of it"
 * Edited.
 * "he interjects short" → "Bellman interjects short"
 * Done.
 * "at the start and" → "at the start," since this is not the end
 * Done.
 * Is the comma supposed to be inside speech marks for "Skyldra"?
 * Yes.
 * Thanks for clarifying! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)


 * The word "very" is not needed before beginning
 * Gone.
 * Pipe syntactic to Syntax
 * Done.
 * Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana on the img text
 * Done.
 * "furioso"[11] in which it's" → "furioso",[11] in which it is"
 * Done.
 * Start a new sentence at "What Fredman himself"
 * Done.
 * "The critic Bo Nordstrand notes" → "Critic Bo Nordstrand notes"
 * No, that's way too American.
 * Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana
 * Done.
 * Start a new sentence at "Like his contemporaries,"
 * Done.
 * "and that quote the Bible" → "and draw quotes from the Bible"
 * Edited.
 * Pipe book of Psalms to Psalms
 * Done.
 * "society chapter rituals and" → "society chapter rituals, and"
 * Done.
 * "The Bellman Society describes it as" → "The Bellman Society wrote of the composition," with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Done.

Performances and adaptions

 * The covers need more information than just appearing on albums to remain per WP:SONGCOVER
 * Removed for now.
 * If the covers end up lacking notability, then merge the translation with the above section and retitle to Reception and legacy
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; another relatively quick review! --K. Peake 11:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that's everything done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:45, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, smooth job once again! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)