Talk:Geet Ramayan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Marathi language is overlinked.
 * Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.
 * It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".
 * Yeah. I hadnt removed that intentionally. Anyway, removed now.


 * the television --> television
 * Done


 * with songs composed by --> and the songs being composed by
 * Done


 * lyrics and music, including singing --> lyrics, music and singing
 * Done


 * References should be after punctuation marks.
 * I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?
 * Check the first para of the lead.
 * Done


 * most popular should be quoted.
 * Done


 * You have already mentioned that Phadke was the composer
 * Done


 * aired --> being aired
 * Done


 * chose should be in past tense Sorry, you have used the correct word.
 * Can you explain this a bit? I didnt get you here.


 * called --> was called
 * Done


 * Ādhunik Valmiki should be italicised
 * Done


 * No need to overlink IST
 * Done. Removed it from the lead
 * The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.
 * Done


 * angered Madgulkar readily declined --> which was readily declined by an angered Madgulkar
 * Done


 * The names of the songs should be italicised
 * Not per WP:MOS


 * who included --> which included
 * Done


 * The second para of "Music and singing" section has no references.
 * Done


 * Describe Nishadraj and the boatmen
 * Done


 * "He was shown to be distracted at the loss Sita ... confessions of loyalty to Sita (in "Lokasākṣa Shuddhī Jhālī")." - Reference needed.
 * Done Though songs can be used as a reference for itself.


 * The lead should have some content of the "Characters" section.
 * Done


 * The last source in the ref section needs fields like publisher and other if possible.
 * Done

Once these issues are fixed I will pass this article. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I have fixed some all of your concerns. Thanks for your review. -  Vivvt  &bull;&#32; ( Talk ) 03:17, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 03:24, 28 March 2013 (UTC)