Talk:Genital trauma

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 August 2019 and 29 November 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hlux1999. Peer reviewers: Gstock1, HanaIverson.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:43, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer review - Hana Iverson
It seems as though this article has been vastly improved by your additions of five new sections. However, there is still room for improvement. Firstly, the definition of Genital Trauma seems to be a re-wording of the phrase "genital trauma", and could be expanded upon by providing more detail, medically, as to what it is. This could be done by providing links to examples of the different types, or even just announcing the different types that are discussed in a later section. Secondly, in the "History of Studying Genital Trauma" section, the author repeatedly mentions "studies" that were conducted over 25 years ago. It would give this article more credibility if the author were to mention who conducted these studies, or, alternatively, provide a link to the analysis of these studies. Finally, there are three quotations in the "Vaginal Trauma from Consensual and Non-consensual Intercourse" section that are not explained. In regards, to gaps, I cannot seem to find any in regards missing categories. My only recommendation would just be to add more details, which is hard seeing as there isn't much research conducted about this topic. So, good job on your edits!