Talk:Gento (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I will handle this as my first review for the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song by  – see below.
 * Came to fix the infobox only for this review. I'm leaving all the other stuff for the nominator to do. I changed all the hlists, except the language parameter, as it shows dot points. — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 06:21, 31 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Should EDM really be listed under genres in the infobox when it is only the breaks? ❌ Removed by
 * Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician) ✅
 * Mention in the first sentence that it was recorded for their second extended play, Pagtatag!
 * Opted for "..., taken from their second extended play (EP), Pagtatag! (2023)." instead.
 * Swap the release and writing/production sentences around ✅
 * "as the lead single from..." → "as the lead single from the album" ✅
 * I replaced "album" to "EP" instead.
 * The trials part does not appear to be sourced ✅
 * Removed
 * "lyricism and SB19's vocals and versatility." → "lyricism, SB19's vocals, and the versatility." ✅
 * "peaking at number" → "peaking at numbers" ✅

Background and release

 * Should the tour be introduced as their second concert tour or first worldwide tour per the source? ✅
 * I introduced it as the first world tour instead.
 * "revealed that the boy band" → "revealed that SB19" ✅
 * "It marks the boy band's" → "It marked the boy band's" ✅
 * Remove commas around Pagisbol ✅
 * "The boy band announced that the EP" → "SB19 announced that Pagtatag!" ✅
 * "although they didn't reveal" → "although they did not reveal" ✅
 * "and was made available for" → "and it was made available for" ✅

Composition and lyrics

 * "which featured strong" → "which features strong" ✅
 * "by himself while he" → "by himself, while he" ✅
 * "Servida had worked with" → "Servida had previously worked with" and remove the first ep introduction ✅
 * "others describe the song as" → "others described the song as" ✅
 * "The song featured clapping sounds" → "The song features clapping sounds" ✅
 * "It included a message about" → "It includes a message about" ✅
 * "which was utilized along with" → "which is utilized along with" ✅

Reception

 * "is described as" → "was described as" ✅
 * "it did not affect the song's message," → "it did not affect the message," ✅
 * "the song highlights the boy band's" → "the song highlights SB19's" ✅
 * Pipe music charts to Billboard charts ✅

Promotion

 * Img looks good!
 * Mention the quarry is large per the source ✅
 * "after its release." → "after being released." ✅
 * "John Legaspi of" → "John Legaspi of the" but where is "bop" sourced? ✅
 * His comment was mentioned in the second paragraph: "Now with over four million views, the song clip, which is a total bop ..." Although I may have possibly taken it out of context.
 * Add a comma after Wish 107.5 Bus ✅
 * "The boy band embarked on" → "They embarked on" ✅

Controversy

 * "the music industry? It's" → "the music industry? [...] It's" per the source ✅
 * "the boy band was criticized online" → "SB19 was criticized online" ✅

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel ✅
 * Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician) ✅

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this should be done soon! --K. Peake 20:27, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for allotting time for my first GAN! I'll make sure to address everything right away. – Abacusada (t • c) 06:35, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your valuable comments! I have addressed all of them. Let me know if there is anything else to be carried out. Thanks! – Abacusada (t • c) 09:47, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, briefly copy edited but this is now good to go! --K. Peake 09:25, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for your help! – Abacusada (t • c) 11:59, 1 August 2023 (UTC)