Talk:George Maziarz

Legislative Accomplishments
The legislative accomplishments section is a mess. The introductory sentence reads: "Since being elected to the State Senate, Maziarz has a legislative record in a variety of policy areas. These laws are:" The bullet points then do not finish the sentence "These laws are.." There is altogether much too much passive voice in this section. I suggest that the introduction to the section be re-written as: "Since being elected to the State Senate, Maziarz has built a legislative record in a variety of areas by:" That way all of the bullet points can lead with a verb referencing whatever Maziarz did.

Also I tagged several unreferenced "legislative accomplishments" which I will remove at the start of the new year if there are no references by then.

--Cjs56 (talk) 06:20, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

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