Talk:George McLachlan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:49, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "September 1901 - 1964" en-dash.
 * "fee of £2,000" etc, inflate fees.
 * "McLachlan joined Clyde and" overlinked and you already mentioned he joined Clyde.
 * "Football League" do you mean English here? Be specific and link.
 * "added a brace" link.
 * "enjoyed a prominent season" in what sense was it "prominent"?
 * Could link 1926–27 FA Cup.
 * "goal from Hughie Ferguson to " overlinked and no need to repeat first name unless it's ambiguous.
 * Link "relegated".
 * "after manager Peter Hodge had" link manager.
 * "Independent's" the s shouldn't be in italics and use the ' template instead of a regular apostrophe.
 * "player-coach" link.
 * "French side Le Havre in 1934–35" which league? Is there a season link for it?  Was it top tier?
 * Link centre-half.
 * "out Queen's Park trainer" overlinked.
 * "beating Racing Santander in " from?
 * "moved to Glasgow following" overlinked,
 * "employment as a draughtsman for" overlinked.
 * "died in September" why not have September 1964 instead of just 1964 in his death "date" in the lead and infobox?
 * Thanks for the review, I've amended all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 19:40, 2 September 2021 (UTC)