Talk:George Watt Park

Copy editing
Much of this article read like a company brochure, it was overly descriptive and chatty, so I edited down by about a fourth. Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:23, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

Alternative information
I'm trying to find out Park's birthday so I typed his name in at Google and found this url. It conflicts with some of the information here at the Wikipedia article. I don't know which is true. [ Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:52, 13 February 2016 (UTC)     (UTC)http://www.saveseeds.org/biography/park/