Talk:Gerald Francis Clifford/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Let the review begin. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Lead

 * We was an active trial lawyer <<=== He
 * I don't think Prohibition should be capitalized since it isn't referring to the era.
 * well known ===>>> well-known
 * He is a member of The Hungry Five ===>>> He is one of The Hungry Five (I don't think "member" is correct since it's not a "real" group.)

Early life

 * although he grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. ===>>> but grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan.

Legal and political career

 * Attorney General of Wisconsin <<<=== I don't think "attorney general" should be capitalized
 * Same thing with capitalizing Prohibition.
 * Is the "national Democratic party convention" the same as the "Democratic National Convention"?

Green Bay Packers

 * His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became part of The Hungry Five ===>>> His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became recognized as one of The Hungry Five
 * Link receivership
 * He then helped draft and signed the Articles of Incorporation ===>>> He then helped draft and sign the Articles of Incorporation

Personal life

 * Good.

Overall

 * All of the links work.
 * Well-cited.
 * No dab links.
 * No plagiarism detected.

Looks good. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:44, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for another review ! I made all the changes except the capitalization of Prohibition and Attorney General. For attorney general, when it is used as a formal title and position that was held, it should be capitalized (see Josh Kaul and List of Attorneys General of Wisconsin), whereas when it is used as a general term is it lowercase. For Prohibition, the link is to Prohibition in the United States. Since it is referencing a specific era and US government policy (and not just the word prohibition), it should capitalized. Let me know what you think. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 14:50, 2 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Passing, good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:37, 2 July 2019 (UTC)